tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4054283904910564073.post5284657476221475070..comments2023-05-18T06:32:49.841-07:00Comments on Ethereal Poetry: The Beginning of RevelryMohd Ehteshamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01662269407830241239noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4054283904910564073.post-23050828703804685852011-12-17T11:53:41.473-08:002011-12-17T11:53:41.473-08:00Thank you very much for the awe -inspiring complim...Thank you very much for the awe -inspiring compliments. :) Why mind the extra gyaan.. As a matter of fact I am glad that you made an effort to point out the one you felt should be revised. But as far as the pronunciation of Visage is concerned, since my very school days, my teachers have taught me to pronounce it the way I have done it in the poem. Moreover <a href="http://dictionary.reference.com/" rel="nofollow">www.dictionary.com</a> also pronounces it the same way. :) Is there an ambiguity related to British or American accent or something of the sort?Mohd Ehteshamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01662269407830241239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4054283904910564073.post-56538901802648329482011-12-14T02:07:05.925-08:002011-12-14T02:07:05.925-08:00Awesome poetry again.. but towards the end, the mi...Awesome poetry again.. but towards the end, the mismatch in rhyme of Visage and Age foiled the rhythm. Else it was going amazing!<br /><br />the 'a' in Visage is pronounced as 'a' in 'March' or 'arch' or 'art', and 'a' in age is pronounced as 'a' in 'place' or 'pray; or 'day'.<br /><br />Don't mind the extra gyaan :PObscure Optimisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08541424160034383432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4054283904910564073.post-55215337915029407112011-11-28T20:08:53.067-08:002011-11-28T20:08:53.067-08:00I couldn't ask for a more delightful end for t...I couldn't ask for a more delightful end for the day. Last line of the second paragraph is extremely beautiful and the repetition of the word 'dance' infuses a bit of playfulness.<br /><br />Last paragraph blew me away. Keep penning more and delight your readers...<br /><br />Thanks for an awesome experience...Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.com